Blog #5-Mechanics

I have many mechanics that could use some work when it comes to my writing. After reading Elementrary Principles of Composition, the mechanic I believe I need the most work on would be keeping related words together. My strongest trait is omitting needless words. In order to better my ability of keeping related words together would be reading my work over and over again. Perhaps reading what I have written aloud would be a good idea for the next assignment. I think when I read it to myself I don't read it as clearly as I would if I were speaking it.